Observations and questions for Clayton - L'abeille

You watched and listened to Clayton's internship presentation. Please put your observations and questions here.

Clayton always seems comfortable speaking during oral presentations ! Your internship was really interesting, especially the packaging creation part ! Maybe we'll see your art on Auchan's bottles ! A few mistakes, but it didn't have any impact on understanding.

I agree with Eléonore, as Clayton is really self-confident and it makes the presentation nice to hear.
He explained all the different market categories and segments and the company ones very well, and explaining the steps of the packaging and so on was great too !
But ! I think he can improve his presentation with less reading and less 'Baah'

What a presentation Clayton ! You seems very confortable but i have to say that i found one of your slide a little bit confusing. But it was a great time. I have not enough word to describe what i lived

I think Clayton maked a great presentation ! I can't remember the last time I cryied so much...
Well, maybe some little mistakes ; the pronunciation of some words, and he reads his notes too much. He has a little OCD, he knocks on the board while he speaks.
But these little mistakes are nothing compared to the pleasure procured by the charisma and the poise of the speaker !

Love your comment Clayton , but yeah good presentation. I liked your use of the visuals in your presentation and find nice that you showed the steps of your work in designing the bottle tag (from the picture to the prototype).

I agree with you. Clayton always looks confident and dynamic in his presentation. It makes us pay more attention to what he said.

Clayton you say everything, I have nothing to add. If I was in the place of John you would have a 19/20 !

Ekrem.K wrote:Clayton you say everything, I have nothing to add. If I was in the place of John you would have a 9/20 !

I think a little more than 9 Ekrem.

I think that Clayton is a very confident speaker, no matter in his mother language French or in the foreign language English.^^ He also has a very nice voice, which keeps the audience concentrated most of the time. I also like the design for the drink product during his internship. I hope that he can do an internship this year which can help him to improve his market research and accounting skills.

Clayton is always confident, but for English presentation he stressed... That was funny to see !
But Clayton, you can relax you speak great in English !